[Commie] Otona Joshi no Anime Time – 02

As far as I know, no one else is subbing this. Reviewing ep 2 because I saw ep 1 a long, long time ago.

Filesize: 293mb
English: American, no honorifics.

Karaoke

According to my screenshots, no songs, apparently.

Typesetting

Um, well, I guess the rainbow effect wouldn’t be easy, but still…

And so on. Not gonna cap six screenshots for the same reason.

Fine.

That ‘l’ is super, super weird. Did you have to pick that font?

Nothing.

Oh, so now you typeset the rainbows. And they look pretty decent.

Everything that was important was typeset.

The ‘G’ on this font is really bad.

Not their fault, but damn, these signs are hard to read.

At least this is the last one!

Not typeset.

Not typeset.

Fine.

Not typeset.

Don’t really know how you’d typeset this, anyway.

Not typeset, but no room for it, either.

okay, so I know this would be hard as fuck, and it’s kind of obvious what it is, but it’s really important.

Not typeset.

Looks good.

Fine.

Fine.

Fine.

Not fine at all. First of all, we don’t really care. Second of all, \an7 that shit with a line break!

Script

WTF are “cottons”? Are you talking about cotton balls, by chance? Otherwise, “cotton” is the plural form of the noun. You can’t make it singular, anyway. “I picked a cotton.” Makes no sense!

“Nights” aren’t a place. You want “when”.

Verb agreement. The first part of the sentence uses “we’ll”, so the second part should, too.

This is awkward. I like putting a “why” after reasons in this type of sentence, but I still don’t think that fixes it entirely.

> I’ve decided to go to the reunion for several reasons.

“But.” isn’t a sentence on it’s own. Maybe consult with the translator to find a better word.

She’s not a late thirty; she’s a woman in her late thirties.

Also, this sentence is so bad that I don’t even know how to rephrase it.

That may be where the reasons lie for us plain and inexperienced women in our late thirties.

There are. Organizers is plural.

No comma after a conjunction.

No comma after a conjunction.

Do you hear me, Commie? No comma after a conjunction!

tl;dr: Not like you have a choice, anyway.